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Goblyn 18b



jail cells are boring.

i guess they are made to prevent stimulating the inmates in any way.
i only realized just how boring a jail cell can actually be when i had to draw one several times throughout multiple conversations between people.

I also realized, one of the hardest things about telling a long form story, with multiple arcs, that leads to a central over arc is; properly measuring out how long you have to build up the causal system for the resulting output (the story itself) to make sense.
what does that mean?
i think we're done plot building for a while.
the craps about to hit the fan.
yaaaaaay.
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fireladyloserrequest Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student General Artist
you have nice shirt designs.
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Professional Filmographer
you think so?
thanks. C:
they're all shirts i either owned at one point
or would like to own.
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fireladyloserrequest Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student General Artist
you should get a design and make it for you and your fans :)
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Professional Filmographer
i do have some shirts kind of like that dedstar one jeph wears. [link]
i'm trying to find the exact shirt design so i can buy a bunch and have them printed.
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fireladyloserrequest Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Student General Artist
omg! awesome!
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Shippuden23 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
This is going to be good :mwahaha:
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Professional Filmographer
hahaha
yes.
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SaoKara Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwwww It\s already over, I wanted to keep readiiiiiiiiiing >< *flails at*
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Professional Filmographer
i know... if i could do them every week i totally would.
but i would never seen the sun again XD
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SaoKara Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL yes... DRAW, smars, DRAW! *cackles evilly and shuts you up in a dark room with food, a toilet and a computer*
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Cecesays Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You really know how to cliffhang.
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
haha thankies

forced to learn under the constraints of a 55 page story deadline.
i hope to get better tho, they still don't have the kick i want you know?
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Cecesays Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think all buildups lack kick.
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capnkupo Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved the dialogue in this between Jeph and Koko was it? The concept of the anchor, nice.

I love this story. :heart:
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
yup koko
hehe thanks.
i rewrote that all week
trying to get it to have just enough info and still have a flow that didn't stagger too much.
so many different combinations of the same lines. XD

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SomGuye Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
Your archive seems to be down, or the link is bad in the above text.
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
hm...
yah you're right.
i'm not sure what was wrong with it
but i reentered the link, and i think it works now

thanks for letting me know
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gijett Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
SEEING SPARKLES.

That's a smart jail system, counter incantations and all. Although... wouldn't that mean they regularly hold logicsmiths? Aren't logicsmiths kind of rare in the present story time?
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
haha thanks.
yah, i was going to address the fact that the walls are pre-lined.
but i couldn't find a good way to fit it into the guards dialog so that it didn't seem like he was talking directly to the readers.

i'll probably make an attachment to the next issue to talk about it a little more, but basically the jail is an older hold over from the all saints war, when imprisoning a Logiksmith was something that was expected and prepared for.

maybe i'll make KoKo mention it in passing next issue... hm...
glad you noticed and cared about a detail like that.
yah. C:
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gijett Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah okay! I was thinking it was from an older time and just happened to be useful in present times. Thanks for clearing that up :D
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ForceHog Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HOW DO YOU MAKE THESE SO FAST?! You are awesome, man. Also, the girl who had the 'oh crap' moment; What was her name?
PLOT TWIST! I honestly thought Jeph had been cutting himself or something... I'm relieved to hear that it's just marks from an arcane magical practice with questionable moral connotations. (Do you see how Goblyn's making me think!?)

Fantastic Job, Smars-man!
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
does it seem fast?
idk... 10 hours a day
feels like it takes forever to me.
heh.

her name is Sethirre. like sapphire.

haha did you? oh my.
no no cutting today. C:
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S3nToros Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
GRrRrRrR! Cliff Hanger DUN DUN!
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
heh. always.
i want to just go ahead and make 19a this week, but i know i need to also work on the munch chunky comic.
if i thought i wouldn't get burnt out from it, i would go weekly with goblyn.
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indagold Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
awesome work on this issue. I don't know why, but I love those little bubbles around ami's head in the last few panels.
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
haha yah?
that's that icy cold snap you get when you see something that just shocks the crap out of you.
heh. a form of sweatles. C:
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indagold Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I like it. It's original.
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wakinslo Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
Excited to see what happens next! Good work with all of these, man! :D
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SolomonMars Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Filmographer
hehe thanks.
i'm pretty excited myself.
i wish i could actually get the issue done faster... or that there was more time in the day to make the comic. C:
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